I forgot all about the flamingos ... nice touch.
I consider it less oafish and more of a loveable character trait!
I accidentally drew this page on really horrible paper; it pilled and bled everywhere when inked. But after some intensive surgery in Painter, it came out ok.
I sometimes worry about Nar coming across kinda... oafish. But damn if that doesn't stop me from drawing him punching people. Even Deer Prince gets some shades of that.